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Once upon a time, you told me about a fic you had written, and I thought I wouldn't like it at all. Years later I read it.

Tarrant is loud all the time. I don't like him. He's too bossy, and he never has any fun. He has curly hair all over his head. Dayna is sometimes fun, but mostly she's cross. She doesn't like talking to me. When I come in a room, she stops talking. Dayna shoots guns a lot. She has curly hair too, but the curls are really tiny. Maybe curly hair makes you cross. You're right. Cally has curly hair, but she's not cross. But she's really sad.

This is a big spaceship, did you know that Teddy? Yes, but I thought you might not have, 'cause you got teleported. It's got lots and lots of corridors and places to hide. When I feel too sad, I go hide. Or when Cally's sad, she makes me feel sad. She looks at me and feels sad. I don't know why, Teddy.

Sometimes I hide when I don't want to do something. Sondra wanted to play hip-tize today, but I didn't want to. I don't like it, it's a bad game. She tried it once, and it made me sleepy and I saw bad things.

Anyway, it's now one of my favorite fics, because I love the child-Avon voice. :-)

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Comment by Mistral Amara
Re: Net-Fic Reviews: Taniwha & Chrysalis

Holy moly, just went back to your site, found the name "Kathryn A#######", chased that back to Hermit, aaaaand...

You wrote "the Butterfly Effect(1)"! Hooray! That's one of my favourite B7 fics!

Awesome.

Elsa

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