Oh, hooray! I get a story before I have to leave! Thank you!
You know, it says something about my output that I couldn't even remember
writing a story with that title. :) Nifty choice, though. And I like the
subtle crossover elements. The Star Trek reference made me smile,
and somehow it makes perfect sense. I'll admit that I didn't twig to the
Buffy component until I read the note at the end (and felt stupid
for missing it, too), but once I did it really made the whole thing fall
together very nicely. (It works if you don't get the reference, I think,
but it works better if you do. And that was cool.)
Anyway, thanks again! Hope it wasn't too difficult an exercise for you.
:)
Oh, hooray! I get a story before I have to leave! Thank you!
You know, it says something about my output that I couldn't even remember writing a story with that title. :) Nifty choice, though. And I like the subtle crossover elements. The Star Trek reference made me smile, and somehow it makes perfect sense. I'll admit that I didn't twig to the Buffy component until I read the note at the end (and felt stupid for missing it, too), but once I did it really made the whole thing fall together very nicely. (It works if you don't get the reference, I think, but it works better if you do. And that was cool.)
Anyway, thanks again! Hope it wasn't too difficult an exercise for you. :)
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Nice one.
I liked the story. First I had to go and read Astro's, which I didn't remember, and then I could appreciate what you had done to it.
My spelling is awful, but is that how you spell "bureaucracy"?
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