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You know, I'm frankly surprised weird things like that don't happen with the TARDIS architecture more often! And is it wrong of me to say that I really prefer your more mature, more experienced Rose to the one we had in canon in S2? :)

By the way, the stories aren't actually due until tomorrow, aren't they? Of course, I suppose it already is "tomorrow" where you are...

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Comment by astrogirl2 —
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Oh, my. This is lovely, and intriguing, and exciting. Better than I'd hoped for from that request--you even got the (play?) question mark in. :-D

I really like the way you've written Rose here. Resourceful, though of course not enough to quite outwit the Doctor (I giggled the first time he found her), not easily panicked, clear-thinking and full of determination and patience (and hope, maybe).

Excellent Nine voice, too; I just watched "The Christmas Invasion" and "New Earth," and Ten has a very different mode of speech--I had no problem reverting back to the sound of my beloved Nine.

Thank you; I'm going to be coming back to this one multiple times, I think.

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Comment by izhilzha —
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Oh, very fun. I like how clever and resourceful Rose is here (though the Doctor is enough cleverer to anticipate her), and how efficiently they communicate and work together (the "ACK"s made me giggle). And how even a simple game can't seem to help going a bit wrong for them. Very nice!

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