Another very witty set. I smile when I read them and there is the sense that
you are enjoying yourself as you write them. I was going to name my favorite
part, but couldn't decide between scenes 2, 3 and 4.
Have just checked your bio and you're from Oz - snap! That means I can
probably say the odd snarky thing about England and its climate and its
mindset.
I'm an editor, sort of, so you'll have to excuse the odd editorial
comment/proofreader's note:
You have a few variations of the spelling of "extraordinarily"
Devonshire Tea should be a lower case "t". ("Devonshire" is a place, so is
capitalised. However "tea" is generic, so it's not capitalised).
I think you need to review the singular and plural forms of the Fooralim.
Are you writing a "Five places Buffy took Dr Who"? I hope so.
Regards
Threadlines
a.k.a. EGVeditor (well, SOMEONE has to care about apostrophes).
He saves the world on a regular basis, he dies and then comes back, he has a
series of goofy friends that end up helping him more than he realizes... The
Doctor really IS similar to Buffy! They would make a good pair.
I do love the idea of Buffy getting something of a vacation as the
Doctor's companion. And I really loved the contrast between "Are you
human? I'm not allowed to kill you if you're human," and "I'm no lady."
Fun -- thanks!
[grins]
Why indeed?
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Hee!
I've had this conversation. Found that slime green was rather overdone. Bring on the oozing mercury innards!
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LOL! These were a lot of fun; so very Buffy.
16/6!
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Fun. =)
17/6!
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Awwww. 19/6! You really outdid yourself this year.
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""Get behind me," they both said in unison."
They would, too.
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:D
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Haha, very nice! :)
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Nice work!
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ROFL. Very Doctor-like, indeed.
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lol Nice!
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=)
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Ahhh. A spa-bath would certainly make up for a lot of hassle, wouldn't it?
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No that Buffy mentions it, they do kinda look like monkey-bars. :)
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Nice one, loving the doctor and buffy :)
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So funny, loved the Fooralis one x)!
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Dear Kerr -
Another very witty set. I smile when I read them and there is the sense that you are enjoying yourself as you write them. I was going to name my favorite part, but couldn't decide between scenes 2, 3 and 4.
Have just checked your bio and you're from Oz - snap! That means I can probably say the odd snarky thing about England and its climate and its mindset.
I'm an editor, sort of, so you'll have to excuse the odd editorial comment/proofreader's note:
You have a few variations of the spelling of "extraordinarily"
Devonshire Tea should be a lower case "t". ("Devonshire" is a place, so is capitalised. However "tea" is generic, so it's not capitalised).
I think you need to review the singular and plural forms of the Fooralim.
Are you writing a "Five places Buffy took Dr Who"? I hope so.
Regards
Threadlines
a.k.a. EGVeditor (well, SOMEONE has to care about apostrophes).
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This is brilliant and funny. I like how you give us small glimpses into their adventures. Windows can work just as well as doors.
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He saves the world on a regular basis, he dies and then comes back, he has a series of goofy friends that end up helping him more than he realizes... The Doctor really IS similar to Buffy! They would make a good pair.
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Every single one of those chapters and stories were completely brilliant, I loved them all.A lot.
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i like this story, thoug i do hope you leave the doctor and buffy as just friemds:)
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my favorites are the last one, and the foo-la-la. Priceless! ^^
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I 3 3 3 3 you for including a Fizgig.
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Pretty cool covering-all-elements adventure.
With the TARDIS covering the water one for last at the end of it.
What a nice gesture of the TARDIS for Buffy.
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Another good one with Doctor and Buffy.
I can totally see Buffy doing acrobatic stuff from those pillars.
Look forward to whatever happens next time.
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giggles fab!
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Love Buffy's last line. The implications are so true XD
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I absolutely loved all of these! Amazing! =)
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This is really cute. I like these two and their budding friendship only because...like I said its really cute.
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"Demon slime, alien slime, why is it always green?"
Excellent!
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These drabbles are great. Even though they are short you capture the essence of the characters in cool moments.
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Lol ;D Loved it ;D
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I love these drabbles ;D Great job!-Love it!
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Woohoo, Buffy!
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Loved all three updates! :):):)
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Buffy kicking ass and failing to take names is always a good time! Thank you for sharing!
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Welcome back.
Latest updates were awesome.
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Like gingerbread houses; a very vivid comparison.
A lot of emotion packed into a very short ficlet;I liked.
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This just makes me want more.
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I do love the idea of Buffy getting something of a vacation as the Doctor's companion. And I really loved the contrast between "Are you human? I'm not allowed to kill you if you're human," and "I'm no lady." Fun -- thanks!
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