Oh, I like that a lot. Well-spotted on the pronouns, too. I hadn't
really noticed that Avon uses "he" at that point, but if so, then this
really does slot beautifully into canon. And, hey, I think "internal
dialog" is an acceptable use of what you were given. :) Excellent job.
Though it makes me wonder if Zen gives each person it communes with the
type of support s/he most needs.
It's very tidy, the way you tied various ideas and events from different
points in the series together here. And I did immediately recognize that
it was set post-Volcano. Good work.
Awesomelicious! (I know, not a word) That was a great story! I have from time
to time wondered about that particular part of the Liberator, but beyond all
of that I loved how you described the experience with Zen and Avon. It read so
wonderfully that when it ended that single sentence made sense for Avon. I
have to confess not spotting that use of 'he' afterwards in the episodes. This
makes a great bridge to such usage. Thank you for writing this!
Oh, I like that a lot. Well-spotted on the pronouns, too. I hadn't really noticed that Avon uses "he" at that point, but if so, then this really does slot beautifully into canon. And, hey, I think "internal dialog" is an acceptable use of what you were given. :) Excellent job.
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Or at least, the manual wasn't very cooperative.
Hee!
Neither was there warm fuzzy love.
Well, that's good. ;-)
Though it makes me wonder if Zen gives each person it communes with the type of support s/he most needs.
It's very tidy, the way you tied various ideas and events from different points in the series together here. And I did immediately recognize that it was set post-Volcano. Good work.
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Applause! That's excellent and so believable for both of them.
I have only one quibble, and it's a small one. Do Australians say 'gotten' like Americans?
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Very well done, and excellent research work.
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Awesomelicious! (I know, not a word) That was a great story! I have from time to time wondered about that particular part of the Liberator, but beyond all of that I loved how you described the experience with Zen and Avon. It read so wonderfully that when it ended that single sentence made sense for Avon. I have to confess not spotting that use of 'he' afterwards in the episodes. This makes a great bridge to such usage. Thank you for writing this!
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